Writing an erotic MDlb story , constructive critism wanted.

[Littleboy026]

Zack !Zack! Time to get up darling its 8oclock.Mum says as she's opening the curtains in my room, I peel my eyes back and see the morning sun beaming though my room and I hide under my pillows to escape the light."Mummy can I please have five more mins in bed" I said with a yorn," No darling I need you up and showered and then after that you need to come down stairs and eat your breakfast , now get out of bed and take off your onesie. " she says in a stern voice and then leaves the room to go and makes breakfast.I get out of my slumber , I take a big yorn and rub my eyes to clear them off dirt and make my way to the shower and wash myself noticing I'm semi hard in my special place.

 

Being a teen age boy i had many fantasys but my strongest urge was to be spanked like a little boy over mommys knee with her antique wooden hair brush.feeling the warmth of her thighs , her holding my hand back with her soft palms and her spanking me with that hairbrush gave me goose bumps all over my body.its what I longed for the most it always have me my most powerfull orgasm.

 

After I cumed and I did quickly I washed my self down and made sure I was clean , I went to my room and found mummy had made my bed ,cleaned my room and also set out my cloths for the day.She picked out my super Marino tidy whites with my blues socks , blue jeans and a white shirt.

 

I came down stairs and my porridge was on the table with brown suger and a little honey. Mommy knew this was my favirout. Mommy was washing the dishes, she as a tall lady about 5,11 with curves she had a light completion her face had very light make up on but very red lipstick, she had brown long hair but today it was in a bun, she was wearing a white floral dress which showed her figure with blond tights and wasn't wearing shoes.

 

As I kept looking at her I kept on imaging about being spanked by her , and made my special place hard again.I thought if I misbehaved maybe she'll spank me , but she never did , it used to be my father who used to do the discipline in the house but he ran off 7 years ago with another woman leaving my mum to cope on her own.would it be crazy if I asked her for a spanking ?! Would she freak out , would she think I'm a weirdo, how would she react ?all of the sudden my stick was in knots and butter flying like crazy and my special place got really hard.

 

After breakfast I got up the courage and I was ask her for a spanking ! It was about 1 o'clock I was downstairs watching cartoon and mom went upstairs to her room to touch up her make up. After about 5 min I slowly claimed by the stairs, my hands were tremering , my stomach was doing flip flops again my brain was going made with pure fear and excitement and it felt like my knees were going to drop under my own weight.I made it to her bedroom door and knocked on it. I said with a very nervous voice "mommy can I come in ?" , "Of course , come in darling " she was sat in front of her white vanity table brushing her hair with that woodern brush that a fantasied about being slapped across my bottom."what is it darling" say asked curiously. At first nothing comes out , I can't evern look at her in the eyes my head is fixed to the ground."Darling what's wrong ? Are you ok ? "She says starting to sound concerned . I tremble and say" nothing mom , it's ok don't worry about."baby what's wrong talk to me I want to know what you wanted to talk about !?" She says to me in a loving way. I take a deep breath and look at her but not in the eyes and my hands are playing with each other out of nervous and I manage to seek out "mommy why don't you spank me when I'm bad ?" She look at me with shock and confusment "well honey I never needed to your a good boy, and haven't done anything to deserve one.it used to be your father that spanked you and since then you never really misbehaved enough for me to spank you." "Why do you ask? Is there something I need to know " she says cautiously." I think to my self it's already out of the bad and this is humiliating but I might aswell go on "mommy I........I want you to start spanking me again." She looked at me and for what seemed for ever nothing was said, I didn't no what to do I was nearly on the verge of crying out of embarsment.Finally she spoke and asked " why Darline why do you want me to do this "she says in an accepting way. In my head I was thinking I can't tell her I do for sexual reason she'll never spank me if I said that. I need to make up a reason but what I should of planed this better.i must of been a while because she said "Zack! I asked you a question". "Because mommy when I used to do something bad I was punished and it used to make me feel loved knowing that dad would displine me , but since hes gone I don't get that anymore "That was the best I could come up with on the spot." You think because I don't displine you that I don't love you ?" Mommy says very upsettingly "I know you love me mommy but I used to know that being displined is also a show of love and I miss that."I say in my most pleading voice."she looks at me like she let me down and says "goes down stairs and let mommy think ok darline.

 

It's been about an houre since that conversation and I'm sitting on the sofa in front of the tv watching adventure time , I'm still very nervous and very embarrassed about the whole situation and conversation and I wish that I never brough it up. I knew mommy was upset and I never ment for that to happen."Zack ! Come to your room I need to talk to you " she says.I make my way up stairs dreading what's gonna be said, I make my way in my room and she sitting on my bed with the hairbrush next to her and I get instantly hard."yyyyeeesss mommy" I say a little scared. "Iv thought about what you said and I never knew how you felt.i just wish you told me sooner.So here's what's going to happen, every time you misbehave you will be spanked. You will be spankee bare bottom and over my knee and with the hairbrush.Aswell as this you take on your own chores like cleaning your room and making your own breakfast and waking your self up every morning." Do you understand ? I can't believe what is happening, this is a dream come true!? I don't understand , I'm thinking to my self also feeling quite vunable and nervousnes."yes mommy I understand " I say submissively. "Also you will be receiving maintaince spanking every Sunday before bedtime to make sure you behave and that you no you are loved." She says sternly."Now young man is there anything you need to admit to ? If you do say it now." I'm thinking to my self I can't rember doing anything bad , but my whole body is craving for a spanking. And seeing mommy sitting on the bed with her thighs on show makes me want to be spanked evern more ! So I say " Yes mommy there is "." Tell me" she's says "last week I went into your purs and took five pounds for sweets"I say very nervously."Zack are you telling the truth !?" I bit the bullet and say "yes mommy I'm very sorry." She stands up walks over the me a grabs me by the ear and marches me over to the bed.where my erection is noticeable but she says nothing. She sits on the bed and I'm staring at the floor."Zachariah ! How dare you steal from me I do nothing but give you what you want and you steal from !? I never took you for a thief ! I can't believe it, maybe you really do deserve a spanking.now drop you trousers and tidy whites " I'm so scared now my heart is racing I don't no what to do ? " Now young man !" With that said I undressed my self . She took me by the rist place me inbetween her legs and flips me over her right knee locking me in with her left leg and my torso laying on the bed with her left hand she grabs my right hand so I can't stop the spanking.and in her right hand she has the hairbrush.mommys knees are so soft and warm and the tights have a very accepting feel to the as lay over. I could feel my bottom being stared at by her as she rubs the brush over my ale globs of bottom with my hard cock pressing against her thighs. She says "Zack I'm very angry and disappointed by you , and how you have acted , I'm glad you told me the truth and not lied but you do deserve to be spanked for stealing from me, I will not allow it."The first spank lands on my virgin spanked bottom, and it's everything I wished for , the sting of the brush and how my cock moves forward on mommys thighs, another one lands taking my breath away, and then another land and again,again,again and again , my bottom is on fire but my cock is ready to explode iv never felt anything like it before a stinging pain but also being on the edge of the most powerful orgasm of my life! She dosnt stop and I exploded all over her knee.she stops and says " Darline I know what's happend don't be embarrassed but your spanking is going to continue , she gave me a thew minuets. Then started to spank me again this time it was different there was no nice pain only a savage stinging burning sensation for the first time I started to squirm and beg to stop , I couldn't take any more , my mommy hold me down and kept beating me like a dog , pretty soon I lost all control and was sobbing like a baby , begging her to stop but she didn't relent.

 

Eventually she stop my bottom red and stinging she let go of my hand and I was there crying over her into the duvet covers.she told me lift up and give her hugs.i put my am around her saying I was sorry and promised to never misbehave again. She was there hugging me kissing my forhead and playing with my hair and wiping my eyes from the stream of tears running down.

 

"Now baby how do you feel ?" She says."loved mommy " I manage to stutter out."I'm glad darling you no I'm only punishing you because I love you, and I want you to feel loved that's why every week you'll be spanked evern if you do nothing wrong your going over mommys knee understand ?" Says says with authority " yes mommy " "now Darline it's an early bedtime for you now go to bed" as I climb into bed she kisses my forhead says she loves me and leaves the room, and before I sleep I feel my warm bottom while pleasuring my self and plan to break a glass tomorrow morning.