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Sharing my poetry for the first time /.\


SpoiledPrincess

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Okay before i share my writings I'd like to say a few things.

This is art. Art is not perfect. It shouldn't be, that's what makes it beautiful. I have never ever really shared my poetry with people other than teachers and such, but i feel most people on here are genuinely kind and wouldn't judge me so i feel more comfortable.

Anyways, feel free to leave comments or your interpretation of my work. Remember not one opinion on it is necessarily right. Everyone sees and interprets things differently (: I welcome constructive criticism and your thoughts.

Now if you've made it this far through my rambling HI THANK YOU. I talk a lot. I apologize.

Here it is. Let me know if i should share more often (:

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This world is still living along the ideology that enough pressure can turn us into diamonds.

I wonder how many bandaids we’ll have to hide until they realise that glass can only crack.

This world is a hammer

And we’re all just devastated

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This one's from a while back and it's short, but i wanna ease into things. Enjoy!!

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OK First I would like to say, no matter what anyone thinks about your writings or any other art always share it :) just because some may not like it or understand it does not mean someone else wont love it and identify with it.

That being said I enjoyed your poem, reminds me of how I felt all the time as a teen. I feel less so now but I do see constant reminders everywhere about how unforgiving the world can be.

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OK First I would like to say, no matter what anyone thinks about your writings or any other art always share it :) just because some may not like it or understand it does not mean someone else wont love it and identify with it.

That being said I enjoyed your poem, reminds me of how I felt all the time as a teen. I feel less so now but I do see constant reminders everywhere about how unforgiving the world can be.

THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK

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