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Of Spring and Heartstrings


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Guest Neter Tua

What now? What now?

Now that winter's come and gone

How now? I should figure out how

How to say that I'm okay

I'm not sad, I'm not mad

I'm over it all after the fall.

 

It's too early, it's too late

It's all happening all at once

And not at all.

 

What now? What now?

I'm okay, I'm okay.

 

I'm no longer your bad guy.

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Guest JayRingo77

No knights need apply.  I like that.

 

I like the structure of this and how you've left 'it' ambiguous so the reader might put their own meaning behind the pronoun.  

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