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    #1 Kichōna

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    Posted 19 November 2020 - 12:14 PM

    So I just wanted to share a story I wrote and published on Archive Of Our Own awhile ago because I am still very proud of it. I'm working on a much longer story at the moment (and by long I mean very long) and someday I hope to share that with you guys too. 

     

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    Posted 19 November 2020 - 04:43 PM

    Wow I just read your story and it's really great!! I loved it! If I ever get around to working on my story ideas in the future I'd like to have you read over them. Your story was just so sweet, I loved all the cute little details like Masaru balancing the drink on Makoto's head, and silly things like that. You really captured the warmth and safety that I think people want from this kind of relationship. Looking forward to your future stories! ^_^ :heart:


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    #3 Kichōna

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    Posted 19 November 2020 - 05:07 PM

    Omg you're so nice ^o^!! I would love to read any and all of your future stories and I encourage you to follow through with them! The little things really are the best parts huh? Sadly, my next story is much sadder, it deal with regression due to trauma/PTSD. It has a happy ending of course, but there is a lot of struggle for the little and the caregivers. 


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    Posted 19 November 2020 - 07:34 PM

    Thank you, you're very nice too  :)  I have some ideas for kind of a big storyline but i dunno if i'll ever actually start it. Maybe i'll just start with a small oneshot sorta thing of just like.. a particular scene I guess. I've never really written a story before though just for fun. And there's nothing wrong with sad stories, some conflict can work well to get readers invested in the stories. Good luck with the writing, and I hope you're having a good night!


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    Posted 20 November 2020 - 06:45 AM

    Your story was excellent.  You've really captured the dynamic of a ddlg relationship, the trust and care, the love.  It was a very refreshing take and so unlike the majority of stuff I've been exposed to.  I loved it and hope you share more stories with us even if they are sad at times.  :)


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    #6 Kichōna

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    Posted 20 November 2020 - 08:58 AM

    Your story was excellent.  You've really captured the dynamic of a ddlg relationship, the trust and care, the love.  It was a very refreshing take and so unlike the majority of stuff I've been exposed to.  I loved it and hope you share more stories with us even if they are sad at times.  :)

    Thank you for the sweet words! I hope I can continue to emulate what made this first story so good! It is support from people like you who make writing so rewarding ^o^.


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